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Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Kazumi on Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:10 pm

Name: Dance of the Venus Fly Trap
Rank: B-Rank
Main Type: Ninjutsu
-Sub-Type(s): Kekkei Genkai
Chakra Nature: N/A
Hand Signs:
Description: After one post preparation the user touches a part of the ground with their body; generally with the soles of their shoes. Twelve spikes of bone rise from the earth curved like the shape of a carcass rib cage; six from the right and six from the left side. The curved bone rises from the ground and intersects; forming a cage of bone around a target, or as a defense for the user. This technique can be used anywhere within 30m of the user. The width and thickness of the bone can vary depending on the purpose of the cage but cages larger than 2m in height and width require more preparation. For every preparation post the size of the cage is increased by 2m in potential height and width; with a max of 10m in either dimension. It can be used to guard the user, or even as an attack to skewer an enemy from below ground.  As its name implies the cage actually looks similar to a Venus fly trap.
Drawbacks/Weaknesses:
Can be countered or destroyed by attacks of equal or higher rank.


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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Go-go on Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:38 pm

Okay lets see.

The width and thickness of the bone can vary depending on the purpose of the cage but cages larger than 5m in height and width require more preparation. For every preparation post the size of the cage is increased by 5m in potential height and width.


As it stands, there is no way to regulate how much Chakra its gonna take to perform Jutsus. The system is set up so that we can use a certain amount max per topic. What I'm getting at it is, the technique is too broad for a mere B-rank. Yes more prep time is required to make it bigger. However, constantly improving the size and width makes it more like a A-S-rank Jutsu.

So please put a cap on the 5m extension of both height and width. Shouldn't go more than an additional 10m. Which makes it 3/4 prep posts?

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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Kazumi on Sat Jul 04, 2015 8:10 pm

Edited.
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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Go-go on Sat Jul 04, 2015 8:57 pm

M A M A
A P P R O V E S.
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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Kazumi on Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:04 am

Name: Finger Bullet Burst
Rank: B-Rank
Main Type: Ninjutsu
-Sub-Type(s): Kekkei Genkai
Chakra Nature: N/A
Hand Signs:
Description: The user causes their Ten-Drilling Finger Bullets technique to break apart suddenly creating tiny pieces of controlled bone shrapnel. The user can decide the direction the shrapnel goes up to 5m from the original technique. They break apart with enough force to easily pierce skin, and the density of the Kaguya bone even makes them capable of breaking through weapons and normal bone with ease. They burst using the original technique's location as the epicenter. This technique happens suddenly to catch opponents off guard; requiring 1 post preparation which is generally when the parent jutsu is used.
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Name: Lightning Release: Dead Bone Pulse
Rank: B-Rank
Main Type: Ninjutsu
-Sub-Type(s): Chakra Flow, Kekkei Genkai
Chakra Nature: Lightning Release
Hand Signs: N/A
Description: The user imbues their entire physique with Raiton causing their bones to accept the cutting and numbing effect of said element. Contact with bones affected by this chakra will overload a target’s nervous system making them incapable of movement for 1 post. The cutting power of the bones are also enhanced boosting the effectiveness of Shikotsumyaku techniques by +1 rank when this technique is utilized.
Drawbacks/Weaknesses:
Wind Release nullifies the effect of this chakra.


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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Kurokyōfu on Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:36 am

Lightning Release: Dead Bone Pulse - Make it B-rank for full body stunning.
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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

Post by Kazumi on Mon Jul 06, 2015 8:38 am

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Re: Kazumi's Jutsu

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